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-I love dice! I'll always remember playing dice games with my grand mother during family reunions.
-It is **the** object that represent the randomness, the chaos.
+I love dice! I'll always remember playing dice games with my grandmother during family reunions.
+It is **the** object that represents the randomness, the chaos.
-There are a lot of dice in games but they are often secondary, they are used as a representation of the RNG, but not really at the heart of the game.
+There are a lot of dice in video games, but they are often secondary, used as a representation of the RNG, but not really at the heart of the game.
What we want with this game is to put the pleasure of playing with dice at the center of the experience.
We started to prototype things in April, using ... real dice and paper.
@@ -24,7 +24,10 @@ We started to prototype things in April, using ... real dice and paper.
Once we were happy with the core gameplay, we started to prototype it in Godot and started to iterate on the gameplay loop.
-In the meantime, we worked on the artistic direction, trying to find the best visuals for this game. After trying a lot of things, one idea kept our attention: the idea to play in a book! And more specifically in a choose-your-own-adventure book. We loved reading these books while being younger and thought that it was fitting well with the dice and role-play theme of the game.
+
+In the meantime, we worked on the artistic direction, trying to find the best visuals for this game.
+After trying a lot of things, one idea kept our attention: the idea to play in a book! And more specifically in a choose-your-own-adventure book.
+We loved reading these books while being younger and thought that they fit well with the dice and role-play theme.
diff --git a/content/fr/news/004-est-ce-que-vous-aimez-les-des.md b/content/fr/news/004-est-ce-que-vous-aimez-les-des.md
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@@ -5,19 +5,19 @@ date: 28/10/2025
**Salut tout le monde ! đČ**
-Comme promis dans le billet prĂ©cĂ©dent, nous sommes prĂȘt Ă annoncer notre nouveau project !
+Comme promis dans le billet prĂ©cĂ©dent, nous sommes prĂȘts Ă annoncer notre nouveau projet !
@@ -25,13 +25,15 @@ Nous avons commencé le prototypage en Avril, en utilisant ... des vrai dés et
Une fois satisfait de la boucle de gameplay principale, nous avons commencé le développement d'un prototype dans Godot.
-Pendant ce temps, nous avons travaillĂ© sur la direction artistique, essayant de trouver le visuel le plus adaptĂ© pour ce jeu. AprĂšs avoir essayĂ© de nombreuses choses, une idĂ©e Ă gardĂ© notre attention: l'idĂ©e de jouer directement dans un livre ! Plus prĂ©cisĂ©ment dans un livre dont vous ĂȘtes le hĂ©ros. Nous gardons un souvenir formidable de ces bouquins que seront le support parfait pour le thĂšme des dĂ©s et du jeu de role.
+Pendant ce temps, nous avons travaillé sur la direction artistique, essayant de trouver le visuel le plus adapté pour ce jeu.
+AprĂšs avoir essayĂ© de nombreuses choses, une idĂ©e a gardĂ© notre attention : l'idĂ©e de jouer directement dans un livre ! Plus prĂ©cisĂ©ment dans un livre dont vous ĂȘtes le hĂ©ros.
+Nous gardons un souvenir formidable de ces bouquins et pensons qu'ils seront le support parfait pour le thÚme des dés et du jeu de rÎle.